Justifying an Evaluation

Essay #2: Justifying an Evaluation The Writing Assignment  Write an essay evaluating a specific subject. (The subject I chose is an iPhone) Examine your subject closely, and make a judgment about it. Give reasons for your judgment that are based on widely recognized criteria or standards for evaluating a subject like yours. Support your reasons with examples and other details primarily from your subject. Write a 900—1300 word evaluation of a particular film, television show, musical album, car, book, restaurant, video game, or specific product of your choice.  State your judgment clearly and back it up with a convincing argument based on standards of value that are appropriate for judging this kind of subject.  When evaluating your subject, argue for whether or not you would recommend your subject. Generally, you will need to fit your subject into a particular class that has particular criteria or standards by which members of that class are measured.  For example, you might argue whether or not The Avengers (your subject) is a good film (the class or group the subject fits into).  You would determine what standards/criteria are appropriate for a good film (i.e., good acting, intriguing plot, compelling characters, etc.) and show how well the particular film meets your criteria.  Use the following guidelines to help develop your essay:       At the start of your essay, present your subject clearly:  state your subject explicitly (name the TV show, film or whatever), and also give the reader enough information about your subject to understand your judgment without giving up too much information.  Use descriptive language to describe you subject to the reader who might not be familiar with it. However, be concise—you do not want the description of your subject to extend beyond the introduction. Also, make a clear, BALANCED judgment.  Assert whether you would recommend your subject or not.  Even though you want to make a judgment, also acknowledge both the good and bad points about the subject–try to be impartial.  For example, if you’re evaluating a film you might argue that the characters are very intriguing but the plot is very thin and unbelievable.  Of course, you must make sure that your good points outweigh your bad points if you’re ultimately judging the film as good and vice versa. Weighting of your criteria (explaining which criteria are most and least important) also helps clarify your judgment.         However, you must go beyond simply stating that you would recommend your subject or not recommend your subject. You must argue for your judgment: present appropriate reasons and argue with evidence and explanation to show whether or not you would recommend your subject.  If your criteria or standards for evaluation aren’t clear, you might also need to explain them.  For example, if you are arguing that Olive Garden is a good restaurant because it has good food, excellent service, and a pleasant atmosphere, then you obviously don’t need to devote much time to justifying your standards.  However, if one of your main criteria is that it has a place for children to play, you would definitely need to explain why this is an important criterion for a good restaurant.         OPITIONAL: As part of your argument, you MIGHT also need to anticipate objections or alternative judgments.  For example, if you want to argue that Apollo 13 is a good family film, you might discuss how the movie appears to be good for the entire family: the language is clean, the movie promotes responsible behavior, and the movie has a fairly simple story to follow.  These elements suggest that the movie is a good family-film.  However, someone might argue that Apollo 13 is not appropriate for small children because some of the situations are “too intense, frightening, or mature” for many youngsters.  You need to address this concern and show that despite these frightening scenes, the film is still appropriate for kids.  Anticipating readers’ concerns definitely enhances your credibility.         OPTIONAL: Another feature that can help your evaluation essays is a pointed comparison.  Compare your subject to other subjects in the same category.  For example, if you’re evaluating a Black Eyed Peas album, compare it to other albums that are in the same class (i.e., hip-hop, rap, dance, etc.).  Make sure your comparisons are pointed in that you focus on a particular criterion or standard and show how the Black Eyed Peas album has more variety in the tracks or has more intellectually stimulating lyrics.         In your conclusion, sum up your argument and restate your final judgment.  *There is a research component for this essay. Please locate at least two reviews of your subject (these can be from websites like Yelp.com, Amazon.com, etc., or any text that contains reviews of your subject). You will choose a sentence or two from these reviews to either help support your own subject, or to argue against in a refutation if you choose to use that option. Because you will be incorporating at least two reviews, you will need a works cited page for this essay. **Also, although sophisticated formal academic writing does not usually allow for the use of the first person (“I”) or the second person (“you”), I will allow you to use both for this essay because it is a bit different than the other essays we write in this course. For an evaluation essay, you are speaking personally to the reader. Essay Criteria: 900-1300 words typed in Times New Roman. MLA formatted. You must research at last two reviews of your subject. These can be from Amazon, magazines (online and print), or blogs. You must be able to cite these reviews. Use these reviews to either support your judgment or to argue against the opposition. Your essay should contain a works cited page with at least two reviews as well as the work you are evaluating. We will use writing process for this course, so make sure to see the assignments for prewriting, rough draft and peer review for this essay listed further along in this module. A suggested scratch outline for this essay is as follows: Paragraph 1: Introduction ending in your judgment (thesis) Paragraph 2: Introduce the first criterion and analyze how your subject measures Paragraph 3: Introduce the second criterion and analyze how your subject measures Paragraph 4: Introduce the third criterion and analyze how your subject measures Paragraph 5 (Optional): Oppositional view(s) and refutation Paragraph 6 (Optional): Pointed comparison/contrast with a similar subject to further prove your thesis Paragraph 7: Conclusion: confirm your judgment

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Learning Challenge

A. Describe a time when you reacted to a learning challenge with a fixed mindset. This challenge can be one at school or any other learning situation. Explain the learning challenge, how you specifically responded to the challenge, and how your learning turned out. Most important, as you look back on this experience, what will you do differently when faced with future learning challenges?  B. Describe a time when you reacted to a learning challenge with a growth mindset. This challenge can be one at school or any other learning situation. Explain the learning challenge, how you specifically responded to the learning challenge, and how it turned out. Describe as best you can how you think you developed the growth mindset that you used in this situation.

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RealtyHop Scholarship

500 word essay, write about how COVID-19 has drastically impacted the world and will continue to change how society views our home as a place of living, working, and studying. As you reflect on the global pandemic and the beginning of your professional life, tell us what you would like to start doing, stop doing, and keep on doing.

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Crisis Action Plan and Response

Your assignment is to create a crisis action plan and compose a positive reply to send to Mr. Ward to handle this bad news situation. Go to Persuade Café using this link: http://wwww.bizcominthenews.com/colonnade (Links to an external site.). Read the information found on this home page, Mr. Ward’s Email, the TripAdvisor Review, the Tweet, and the YouTube Video found in Tabs at the top of the page. Begin with a title page. 1- Create a two-page paper showing your crisis action plan to handle this situation. 2- Prepare an email response to Kevin Ward’s email. 3- End with a reference page citing the research found on the above website pages.

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 The Canterbury Tales

Instructions: Goal: Chaucer’s Prologue describes various people in connection with their profession. Analyze the Skipper’s description.  Explain two things the Skipper’s description reveals about people in his occupation. Using APA format, provide details from the poem referencing specific line numbers to support each idea

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Story of An Hour

Write a 2-3 page essay on the following topic: CHOOSE ONE STORY “Story of an Hour” pp.265–266  “Hills  Like White Elephants pp.313-317      Please discuss how ONE AUTHOR uses the elements of setting and characterization to convey the deceptive side of human nature. Be sure to analyze the story’s conclusion.     Does the essay clearly identify the elements of setting and characterization used in the short story?   Does the essay analyze those elements?   Does the essay illustrate how these elements work together to convey the darker side of human nature?   Does the essay analyze the story’s conclusion?   Does the essay contain a clear thesis statement, support for that thesis, well-written paragraphs, clear transitional sentences between paragraphs, correct grammar and punctuation and a strong conclusion?

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War Changes Drastically in this Story by Hemingway

Frederic Henry’s perspective and attitude about war changes drastically in this story by Hemingway. How and why does Henry’s change happen? Write a reflective essay in which you explain Henry’s change in thinking about war and connect this to a personal experience where you underwent a significant change of perspective, how and why this change happened, and how this benefited your life. The essays thesis statement and body contents should refer back to A Farewell to Arms and clearly state that connection. the conclusion should refer back to A Farewell To Arms too.

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Gandhi Essay

In 2-3 Pages. Double Spaced, 10 or 12 point font Mohandas Gandhi Question: What was the legacy of Gandhi’s efforts in India? How did the Indian independence movement influence future independence movements in other countries? How did he help to end colonialism and change global power structures? In particular, how did Gandhi’s methods of non-violent protest influence future social and political movements?  docx is the preferred provided links: History Channel  (Links to an external site.) : https://www.history.com/topics/mahatma-gandhi  (Links to an external site.)   (Be sure to watch the short speeches by Gandhi himself) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T_sGTspaF4Y&index=40&list=PLBDA2E52FB1EF80C9 https://www.biography.com/activist/mahatma-gandhi

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College Students Bypassing Degrees on Purpose

Niralkumar Patel  Professor Dademo English 121 12 July 2020 Outlining the Essay  this is the outline and the sources are down below Thesis: Education is changing and has evolved in so many ways that students often dropout to not waste money on education. Now companies like google and apple have their own programs and they teach you coding and people usually prefer that over lecture because it is online and they can do it whenever they want. It is just easy for them to be home and work on something else and at the same time do something else.    Why students are choosing not to continue further education?  How technology impacts this ? Is social media changing the world ? How companies like google and apple are changing the market by given opportunities? Topic sentence 1. They are not choosing the education because there are many ways to get a job or make money and have knowledge at the same time.  Quotation : “Some might feel they can’t afford it, while others think they’re not smart enough, or don’t know where to even begin with the college application process, so they don’t even consider it. (College Atlas)   Topic sentence 2. Technology nowadays is very important to make money or to learn something that you are passionate about such as by watching youtube video tutorials you can really learn something and it’s free.        Quotation : “If I hadn’t gone to college, I would be farther along in my entrepreneurial journey. I would have more businesses, more experiences, and more opportunities to make the world a better place.” (Patel)   Topic sentence 3. Yes, it’s changing the world. People can make money from social media and literally have a better life and be happy.        Quotation : “The rise in digital devices coincides with a growth in both virtual and real-world classrooms. Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and other social media platforms helped launch a hyperconnected, globalised community, exposing all to brand-new ideas and concepts at the simple click of a button.” (Western)   Topic sentence 4. Companies like google are offer 6 months program to learn coding and all that so that you pass their test you can get hired by them if you have a good knowledge        Quotation : “As one of the world’s premier companies, Google has truly affected the way everyone accesses information and how people learn online. To further encourage and nurture the leaders of tomorrow, Google has created many different educational programs for all ages.” (Lucas).  the soucres are here: https://www.collegeatlas.org/attending-college.html https://www.forbes.com/sites/neilpatel/2016/12/26/my-biggest-regret-in-life-going-to-college/#790c4da01ac7 https://www.studyinternational.com/news/tech-social-media-changed-face-education/ https://www.lifehack.org/articles/technology/google-and-educational-programs.html

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Procrastination

Why procrastination is a bad habit and why its important to avoid it. Bring in real research and statistics for those that procrastinate.

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