[SOLVED] Write a story in essay form about a moment in time that has impacted you greatly, or changed you, especially in terms of choosing the healthcare field.

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REVISE

READ THROUGH WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN AND CONSIDER THE FOLLOWING QUESTIONS

ARE ALL OF YOUR PARAGRAPHS UNIFIED AROUND A SINGLE, COHERENT POINT?

DO THEY ALL HAVE TOPIC SENTENCES?

DO YOU HAVE A GOOD THESIS STATEMENT?

DO YOUR PARAGRAPHS MAKE SENSE IN THE ORDER THAT THEY ARE CURRENTLY IN, OR DO THEY NEED REORGANIZATION?

DO YOU HAVE A SOLID INTRODUCTION AND CONCLUSION?

WHAT ELSE CAN BE DONE TO IMPROVE THE ESSAY, ACCORDING TO THE GUIDELINES OF THE RUBRIC?

EDIT

READ THROUGH WHAY YOU HAVE WRITTEN AND CONSIDER THE FOLLOWING QUESTIONS

DO YOUR IDEAS MOVE EASILY FROM POINT TO POINT?

DO YOU NEED TO ADD TRANSITIONS BETWEEN YOU PARAGRAPHS?

CAN YOU USE DESCRIPTION IN A MORE ACCURATE AND INTERESTING WAY?

ARE THERE ANY GRAMMATICAL ERRORS, SPELLING ERRORS, OR PUNCTUATION PROBLEMS?

WHAT ELSE CAN BE DONE TO IMPROVE THE ESSAY, ACCORDING TO THE GUIDELINES OF THE RUBRIC.

MAKE SURE THAT YOUR ESSAY IS CORRECTLY FORMATTED IN APA STYLE