[SOLVED] The Motivation of Internationalization

This is a master dissertation. The similarity index is 40%. Please rewrite it and make sure that the similarity is lower than 10%. The following words are the teacher’s feedback. Please rewrite according to feedback. On the basis of the above criteria, the strengths of this work are…   It seems that you understand some theories regarding FDI motivation, location and entry mode choice. Some of your explanations on these issues regarding Chinese mobile phone companies’ internationalisation seems plausible. You have some knowledge about the current state of Chinese smartphone market and Chinese mobile phone companies’ outward direct investment with data for support.    Areas for improvement are…   This is not really a coherent dissertation. Although it is supposed to be about Chinese mobile phone industry’s internationalisation, a large proportion actually discuss China’s domestic smartphone market. Moreover, there isn’t a common theme that links the issues of motivation, location and entry mode choice. Hence the dissertation lacks a focus. Furthermore, it is unclear why the author wants to write on these issues and what the academic and practical importance this dissertation has. The dissertation does not provide sufficient information to allow reader to have an overview of China’s mobile phone OFDI’s location and entry mode. It claims to conduct case study, but there is not detailed information about individual mobile phone companies’ OFDI. It provides some detailed information about those companies’ market share and performance in overseas mobile phone markets, but this information has nothing to do with OFDI and is not relevant. On motivation, though the author provides some evidence on the deceased growth in the domestic market and argues this is the reason for OFDI by Chinese mobile phone companies, but this can just be a speculation and Chinese mobile phone started OFDI long before the saturation of the domestic market. The part on literature review is not really literature review. Rather, two of the three paragraphs are about the contents in the following chapters. In the methodology part, it is suggested to use case study, but there is no information regarding which cases are chosen and they are chosen, how specific information regarding those cases are collected. The English is hard to follow and the style of writing with frequent deviation makes it difficulty. There isn’t enough citation. Lastly, the dissertation has serious plagiarism issues and several paragraphs are wholly copied from internet sources.

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