[SOLVED] Stability of Slope
#1 change the title of the paper to something related to the topic. #2 change all objectives make it clear enough to address the following such as checking the erosion control , stability of slope, testing wall under high pressure, water-retaining, cost-efficiency and material wastes. #3 in objectives you should explain clearly why this research study was conducted or why there is a need to perform this study. #4 should be clearly mentioning a good comparison between sheet piles and cantilever retaining wall all over the paper and don’t add any useless and general information. #5 the whole literature should be critique literature. ? #6 dont write in general statements. Discuss more about technical aspects. #7 consider cantilever retaining wall and sheet piles as an element of discussion, like design aspect which increase the strength and durability of these walls. #8 look at the soil parameters which needs to be considered for designing of these walls. focus on UAE soil and compare it with other country soil. #9 you can make detailed analysis of different types (sheet piles and cantilever retaining wall) and then can consider it for the analysis. #10 mechanically stabilized earth it is widely used in uae at all ramps to over head bridged. You can take any one as a case study and discuss this from material selection to design and implementation and can perform some kind of analysis with any other commonly used techniques used in UAE. #11 dont give any virtual examples take an example from a case study. #12 remove anything unrelated to the topic make it clear for the reader to get the point behind this paper. #13 Make the paper about only the UAE market in terms of costs and technicality.
