Education System
Follow these comments:You have some good material for your paper but do not have information covering every required area. You should now work on putting it together and connecting the ideas with a clear flow and transitions so you can really make your case for the problem and the treatment of the problem. Refer to the outline you created to help with organization of your paper. You need to address theories of learning that connect to your topic. As would be expected in a draft, there are some changes that should be made to improve the quality of your paper, however you need to proofread well. The specific details of the problem areas and changes can be found in the paper itself. The learning theories can be constructivism, cognitive, behaviorism, humanism, or connectivism whatever theory connects to the topic of my paper.Then use all these files to correct the Course Final Draft Assignment.
