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My teacher wants me to revise my essay and this is what needs to be done: Use a military date, not a standard date. A New title. Why are you not quoting from Costello and Hope? Paraphrasing is off limits. You must learn and apply the ability to use quotations in writing. You announce in your thesis. Never state what a paper is, what it will do, what a part of the paper is, etc. I see no true quotes in the body paragraphs. YOu must quote, paraphrasing is off limits. The Conversely paragraph has ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????no research source or evidence. Avoid in conclusion. It is over used. Have I not stated this in your essays before? Pluralize Work to works.