ANY TOPIC ENG 121 Module 1B Transcript Title: Drafting the
ANY TOPIC ENG 121 Module 1B Transcript Title: Drafting the Essay Slide 1 Narrator: Welcome to this presentation that will cover drafting the essay. Slide 2 Slide Title: Drafting the Essay Slide Content: No content Narrator: We have already discussed prewriting to find ideas, narrowing down a topic, writing your thesis, and finding supporting examples. Now, we are ready to start writing the essay, so to begin, lets focus on how to draft your essay. Slide 3 Slide Title: Drafting the Essay Slide Content: Repeated in narrative Narrator: First, think of your essay as a complete piece of writing. It must introduce the concept, explain the concept, usually using examples, and then conclude with a summary. Slide 4 Slide Title: Drafting the Essay Slide Content: Repeated in narrative Narrator: It is not necessary to start writing an essay from the beginning and write straight through to the conclusion. It is, however, necessary to plan the entire essay before you start to write. A simple outline will have an introduction with several supporting paragraphs followed by a conclusion, so lets look at the 12-point essay.Slide 5 Slide Title: 12-Point Essay Slide Content: Repeated in narrative Narrator: The 12-point essay is actually a miniature outline of a five-paragraph essay, except it only has 12 sentences. Each sentence is a small part of the overall essay. There is one introductory sentence, one thesis statement, nine support paragraph sentences, and one conclusion sentence. Slide 6 Slide Title: 12-Point Essay Slide Content: Introduction Thesis (contains because and three supports A.B.C.) First support of the thesis (states A) First support of A Second support of A Second support of the thesis (states B) First support of B Second support of B Third support of thesis (states C) First support of C Second support of C Conclusion Narrator: As you can see, the first sentence is the introduction. The second sentence is a three-pronged thesis statement. Sentences 3 through 5 are for your first support paragraph; sentences 6 through 8 are for your second support paragraph; and sentences 9 through 11 are for your third support paragraph. Sentence number 12 is your conclusion. Sentences 3, 6, and 9 are your topic sentences. From this short outline, you can develop your entire essay because you now have a plan of attack. Slide 7 Slide Title: Drafting the Essay Slide Content: Repeated in narrativeNarrator: Once you have your plan, you can start writing your essay. Some students start with support paragraphs; some write the introduction and conclusion first. There is no one system. Sometimes its easier to write the introduction and conclusion after you have written your support paragraphs. Regardless of how you choose to write your essay, you will accrue numerous drafts. There are several sections to your drafts: the first draft, the middle draft, and the final draft. Slide 8 Slide Title: Drafts Slide Content: Repeated in narrative Narrator: The purpose of the first draft is usually to get your essay on paper. Take the information youve discovered through prewriting, combine it with your outline, and put it in writing. Once you get the material on paper, you can start the writing on your middle drafts. Slide 9 Slide Title: Drafts Slide Content: Repeated in narrative Narrator: In the middle drafts, you will work on unity and coherence. You will establish your transitions through words, phrases, repetition, and parallel structure. Sentence development and variety will be created in these drafts. By the time you have completed the middle drafts, your essay should be almost complete. Slide 10 Slide Title: Drafts Slide Content: Repeated in narrative Narrator: The final draft consists of modifications, improvements, and proofreading.If possible, the final draft should take place at least 24 hours after the middle If possible, the final draft should take place at least 24 hours after the middle drafts are completed. This way, you will look upon it with a fresh set of eyes. The final draft involves making changes that improve not only what your essay says, but how it says it. Proofreading is checking for grammatical mistakes, errors in spelling, typos, and other superficial elements. Hopefully, the information shared in this presentation will help you draft your first essay. Slide 11 End of presentation