HUM-200 Applied Humanities Week 6 exploration document

I need support with this Art & Design question so I can learn better.

The assignment is to write an exploration document on two artifacts. Below is the prompt;

“Your exploration document should answer the following prompt: Choose two cultural artifacts to analyze. These artifacts may take the form of any artisticmedium, such as literature, poetry, music, film, dance, painting, and sculpture, and so on. Then, identify a common theme and compare your examples to one another as expressions of the same theme in different cultural artifacts.

I have already wrote my first draft, and it was graded against the rubric and the instructor has given me feedback. Basically make the changes according to what the instructor has asked.

Attached is the rubric, my rough draft and the notes my instructor gave me. It has got to be written in the same kind of format that the rough draft is written.